Friday, September 28, 2012

Stomach Churning

“What a  lovely day”, said  Kate, The sun shining through her bedroom window and right into her eyes.
Ring, ring! She picked up her mobile phone and answered it, it was her friends Mary and Kelly they told her that she was invited to the Rainbow’s End, then Kate rushed to her mother’s room and asked if she could go, her mother replied “ummm, ok Better be home by 9.45 o'clock”. 

She called up her friends and say she was ready to come and to pick her up, they replied “ok”. 

When they got there Kate said  “Wow”  this is so big and exciting”. When they were riding the roller coaster, they went up and down an their stomach felt like it was going to burst. When the roller coaster stopped all there eyes felt crazy.
“It was spectacular,” Mary said, “I want to do that again!”. I screamed.  

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